Life is all about engagements,
entanglements of
thoughts of action,
actionable thoughts
action and thoughts,
and sometimes thoughtless actions
meaningless thoughts
until the colourful skeins transform into
one giant, jumble, colourful ball of ideas.
It takes a calm mind,
cool and clear
to separate and put them to use
or to see meaning morph from
what is far from a mess.
~In response to Earthweal Weekly Challenge : Entangled Up in You from Brendan
https://earthweal.com/2021/01/18/earthweal-weekly-challenge-entangled-up-in-you/
It does take a calm mind........and thoughtful action. Lovely to see you at earthweal.
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DeleteI like the way you examined the entanglement of thoughts in the first stanza then set them straight with a calm mind in the second!
ReplyDeleteThanks for the read, Ingrid!
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I like the imagery and optimism in this and the clever wordplay of the poem..JIM
Thank you, Jim!
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